Beta Request for Fifty Shades fic

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Hello, everyone!

I'd like to post a 50 shades spitefic I wrote a while back, but I'm sure it's rife with errors. Any beta readers out there who are willing to help a gal out? It's fairly short and a sort of crossover with The Path, which is a videogame that centers it's story around the tale of little red riding hood. If there's anybody who wants to proofread, please drop me a message or comment on this post. Thanks in advance!