Beta Request for Fifty Shades fic

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Hello, everyone!

I'd like to post a 50 shades spitefic I wrote a while back, but I'm sure it's rife with errors. Any beta readers out there who are willing to help a gal out? It's fairly short and a sort of crossover with The Path, which is a videogame that centers it's story around the tale of little red riding hood. If there's anybody who wants to proofread, please drop me a message or comment on this post. Thanks in advance!

Debate Fic: Nick Knight vs. Edward Cullen

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Title: Debate Fic: Nick Knight vs. Edward Cullen
Author: Melissa Treglia (aka gnosticdiva)
Fandoms: Twilight/Forever Knight
Word Count: 1470
Rating: PG
Inspiration: marienomad's debate!fic series, obviously. I just couldn't help but get into the act, by pitting my favourite good-guy-with-fangs against the sparklepire we all love to hate.
Warnings: Some anti-human sentiments (as per Twilight's canon). Major spoilers for both series. Some shout-outs to some of my favourite anti-Twilight fic, too.

Summary: Nick and Edward discuss their similarities... and their very clear differences.
( It's not a lifestyle choice. It's choosing to murder or choosing not to. )