Fic rec

[marienomad.livejournal.com]

Story: Loose Canon: Following Too Closely by The Sound and The Fury
Timeline: Eclipse
Summary: What if Bella had called Edward on his behavior when he tailed her home from La Push? What might have happened if she actually stood up for herself? Bella/Edward the way it should have been.
Word Count: 9,606
Genre: Hurt Comfort/Romance
Reccer's comments: This is an interesting take on the scene involving Edward treating Bella like a possession.  The characters developed and the relationship take on a deeper meaning. 

Comments

[lamelurker.livejournal.com]

Good job! That was such a nice read. I wish it had been canon--alas, another opportunity pissed away by Smeyer. It was great to see Bella stand up for herself, mature a little and have a tender moment with Carlisle. Thanks!