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Title: Justice is Blind
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sos_sporkers
Fandom(s): The Twilight series
Rating: PG-13 for content (R for thematic elements)
Word Count: 2209
Inspiration: A Twilight fanfiction (The Dark Side of the Moon) in which Edward claims that the absolute worst thing he can do is turn Bella.
Warnings: Lots and lots of murder or implied murder, but nothing is graphic.
Summary: Edward's vigilante days and the lives and families of some of his victims.



Daniel was never a fantastic runner. Despite being a somewhat formidable tennis player, the simple exercise of running eluded him. Short bursts, oh that he could manage quite well, but any distance above three hundred metres was just plain torture.

Today was probably the first time he ever found running effortless.

He flew down the street, his feet barely seeming to touch the ground, his heart soaring, singing, bursting with joy. Whenever his step faltered or the cloud of excitement receded in his mind enough for him to notice the ache in his legs, just the knowledge of the simple piece of paper lying innocuously in his backpack pushed him on again.

He had to get home, had to show them, had to prove to them that he really had changed.

It had all started two years ago, when his friend had dragged him behind the school with a conspiratorial glint in his eyes. They shared a bottle of vodka that day, choking down the burning liquid, both determined to prove that they were men. They spent their afternoon collapsed against the dirty, graffitied wall, dizzy, disorientated, and yet happier than they had ever been.

It became almost a routine. They’d sneak out the back once a month and share a bottle of alcohol that he never knew the origins of. Then, they started doing it once a fortnight, once a week, once a couple of days, maybe they should do two bottles today, sneaking into the backs of clubs and restaurants, drowning themselves in the twice-illegal spirits.

He stumbled again, his foot catching on the uneven pavement, his heart lurching as the burning in his lungs pierced the euphoria clouding his mind. But he shook his head and ran on, gasping down huge gulps of air.

That was in the past. He had been completely sober for two months now, and though he still felt the temptation (he honestly doubted it would ever go away), he was equally sure that he would be able to combat it.

And now, finally, he had something to show for his efforts. The first time in over two years that he had ever gotten a full-mark.

His parents. They had been so worried, so confused. They couldn’t understand how their sweet little boy had transformed into the disheveled drunk that stumbed into their house at two o’clock in the morning and smeared vomit and blood on their couches. And oh christ, he had pushed them away. He wouldn’t listen to them. He didn’t understand. And he had spit in the face of their concern and advice and sneered at the sight of their tears.

But it was okay now. He was back on the path he needed to be. And he could finally make them proud again, finally be the strapping young man they wanted him to be.

Daniel Williams, sixteen years old aspiring businessman, ran on, his feet light and his heart even lighter.

He didn’t notice the shadow dropping behind him.

He was only momentarily startled when he was flung into a wall.

He didn’t feel his skull caving in and his neck snapping.

He was already dead when the monster descended on his neck.



She was a quiet woman, soft-spoken and thoughtful. Her movements were always controlled and smooth and she never said anything that she hadn’t run through in her mind several times. As a girl, her parents had often joked that she was more mature than them, and her friends had always turned to her for help whenever anything came up. She was always happy to help though, and there were few problems that she could not overcome.

She was quite startled when she found herself fidgeting at the dinner table, drumming her fingers and glancing at the clock every five seconds and even humming tuneless songs under her breath.

Her husband was late. Of course, it was entirely unreasonable to expect that he came home on the dot every day. Traffic was getting worse and worse these days, and work was piling up higher and higher too. But knowing didn’t help. She still found herself fretting and wringing her hands.

Supper was laid out before her, still steaming hot (she reheated it every half an hour). It was quite a bit more elaborate than usual, but she felt that the occasion demanded some celebration.

She was always a level-headed girl. She knew since she was thirteen what she wanted to do and never deviated from the path. Everything in her life was planned out meticulously beforehand and every emergency was accounted for.

Her husband was the one thing she did not plan for.

She thought she knew exactly the type of man she wanted to be married to – sensible, successful, intelligent, and every bit as logical as her. But then he appeared in her life like a ray of sunlight banishing storm clouds, and everything was flipped upside down. No matter how rash and spontaneous he was, though, there was one thing that remained constant.

She loved him.

Even after four years being married together, and seven years of dating each other, sometimes, when she accidentally glanced at him, he’d still steal her breath away. She would often tell him that she liked his dimples the best, loving the way they made him seem forever optimistic and joyful and full of hope. But secretly (she would never admit this to him), she loved the way he’d grin bashfully everytime and her world would suddenly be ablaze with colours and sounds and her heart would tremble and melt.

She smiled, slowly caressing her stomach, imagining the grin that would light up the world when he finally got to hear the news.
Somewhere, in the maze of alleyways that spread through the city, Jonathan Morrison, soon to be father and designer of furniture, fell to the ground, his mouth forever twisted in a silent scream.

 
He was a solitary man. He subscribed to no newspapers, rarely opened the television, read no books. He never relaxed in his garden, or greeted the neighbours that came and went, or attended church. His life consisted of two locations and a straight line.

His home, old and decrepit, threatening to fall down at any second, and yet crammed so full of memories that just the thought of moving scandalised him. A small kitchen, a perpetually messy bedroom, a living room that never saw any guests. No one could say that it was a spectacular home, or even just a decent one, but it was his and he loved it.

A short walk down the street, across the park, a few more paces to the signal, and a left turn. It was his most frequently travelled route and, sometimes he suspected, the only route that he travlled at all these days. He did so as quickly as possible, with his head ducked down to avoid the curious eyes of strangers, shuffling along and suppressing a shudder whenever someone ventured too close to him. But, sometimes, on slow mornings when the roads were all but empty, he’d allow himself a few moments to gaze upon the smooth grass and twisted trees in the park and the little birds that danced in between gnarly branches.

Then, there was his flower shop. Along the walls, upon the shelves, not a single inch of flat surface was not covered with a multitude of flowers of every kind imaginable. He loved seeing the momentary shock on the faces of his customers as they first walked in, bombarded by an explosion of colours and smells. They’d stare around, gaping, eyes wide with wonder and surprise. And, disturbed though he may be by their presence, he couldn’t help but swell in pride.

He knew every flower in there, knew just how much to water them and how to keep them fresh and perfect, where they came from and where they would look the best. He cared for them, loved them like children, and called them his only friends. Customers were rarer these days, his shop too out of the way and inconspicuous, tucked in an unknown alley. But he was happy. He could never be unhappy when surrounded by the blooms that he cultivated with his own hands.

He ran his fingers loving along the rims of one of the hundreds of pots that filled his shop and turned to have a last look at his children. Then, he quietly locked the door behind him, tucked the keys in one of the many pockets on his old, wrinkled coat, and geared himself to travel back home, to sleep and dream and retreat to that land with no stranger and only flowers, miles upon miles of flowers...

His death was significantly more painful, as he had turned the second the shadow pounced on him, presumably to look upon his shop one more time. What should have broken his neck only snapped his arm, and the cold fangs of his attacker sank into his shoulders instead of his arteries.

But, in the end, James Warren, seventy-eight years old, did sleep, though no dreams awaited him.


Everything was going according to plan.

She was walking down the street, still crowded since it was the weekend, but Edward knew that in just a few minute, she’ll have to turn into a much quieter alley that was the only way to her home.

He crept along the roofs of buildings, pressing himself against the cold concrete, nimbly crawling along as he tracked the girl. As always, her clothes were brightly coloured – her shirt was a blinding red and her dress obscenely pink. It swished about her calves as she walked – no, danced – through town, the bright neon lights making her golden hair seem to glow. She was smiling, her eyes were bright and her feet were light, the heel of her shoes clacking against the pavement.

There she went, turning into the narrow alley, her dress flaring around her. Edward waited a bit, then, with a quick glance around him, dropped behind her silently.

She rarely ever noticed her surroundings. She didn’t have a habit of looking from side to side as she walked. Sneaking up on her would be a piece of cake.

He quickly gained on her, still keeping his footfalls so light that even his vampiric senses couldn’t hear them.

It was quick.

She barely had the time to yelp in surprise before Edward snapped her neck with a flick of his wrist.

He brought her limp body against his lips, a little surprised at how little she weighed. But then again, not many people felt heavy to him nowadays.

Her blood was sweet, ecstasy in liquid form, filling first his mouth, then his body, then his heart.

Then, he discarded her.

With the recent rise in crime, no one would notice one more body. Getting rid of it properly simply took much too long.

Edward turned on his heels and licked at his lips. Was there really so little blood in the human body? Each feeding seemed shorter than the last. Sometimes, he felt he had hardly begun to drink before the flow of the sweet liquid stopped.

And was blood really always this unsatisfying? He could remember the first time he tasted it. He doubted he’ll ever forget. It was, simply, orgasmic. It had overwhelmed him, obliterated all thought. For a moment in time, nothing existed except for the growling hunger in his stomach and the thick, oozing blood, so much blood, running over his hands, his face, his tongue...

It was the second time he had fed that day, and when he finished, he still felt as empty as he did before. There was still that itch in his throat that was just barely there, popping up at the most inopportune moment, always threatening to drive him to insanity.

Should he increase how often he fed again?

After all, there were plenty of disgusting, filthy, sinful people around. These days, he couldn’t look anywhere and not see one of them. They were dressed just like everyone else, and often looked ordinary enough, too. But Edward knew. He knew every thought that went through their head. And he knew that he was the only one who knew.

The police were corrupt and ineffectual, and the morally bankrupt were filling the streets, crowding out the virtuous. And, well, who better to clean up this mess than him? He, who could read thoughts. He, who could subdue any criminal. He, who can never be bribed or corrupted.

A brief image of him as an avenging angel, raining down the fury of heaven upon the heathens that only ever seemed to increase in number no matter how hard he worked, flashed before his eyes, and Edward drew himself up and inhaled, almost tasting the blood of every one of those sinners on his tongue.

He walked out of the alley and down the street, letting the thoughts of the people around him filter in and out of his head.

Yes, it was time that he picked up his pace. This world was corrupted, dirty, and he, Edward Cullen, was the only one who could clean it.

He was Justice and Justice was blind.


Date: 2012-04-12 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-regalli.livejournal.com
Aaaand that was quite creepy. Thank you for pointing out just why we can't sympathize with Edward Cullen.

Date: 2012-04-12 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quicksilvermad.livejournal.com
Oh damn.

*nods*

Good job.

Date: 2012-04-12 10:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecuriouskitty.livejournal.com
Dammit, you've destroyed my little fantasy where Edward really does only kill the worst people ever. Obviously that's still not OK, but it was better than imagining him killing indiscriminately. I guess the bit of my brain that tries to prevent brain-melting-syndrome had made me overlook that this is EDWARD making the judgements on who 'deserves' to die *brain melts*

Date: 2013-03-01 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camillevwatson.livejournal.com
That didn't quite come across... Great story, but what did each of them do that Edward locked on to them for?

Date: 2013-03-04 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camillevwatson.livejournal.com
Ah. Most of it made sense, that part was just confusing. The sad thing is that this is all so in character for Edward, it's almost not even funny.

Date: 2012-04-12 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erikalyndis.livejournal.com
Edward was channelling Light Yagami there towards the end. Was that exactly as planned?

The idea of someone like Wardo judging people is insanly scary, and you did a very good of bringing that accross.

Date: 2012-04-13 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erikalyndis.livejournal.com
Vigilante!Edward has always struck me as a very Lightish type. I actually heard those last few lines being said in Mamoru Miyano's voice!

Date: 2012-04-12 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xxburningsoulxx.livejournal.com
Good job. I'm creeped out. O_O

Date: 2012-04-12 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lamadamerouge.livejournal.com
This just shows how utterly creepy this guy is. -shudders- I am so glad he's not real.

Date: 2012-04-14 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lamadamerouge.livejournal.com
You're welcome! I've been working on something with him, but I don't think I'm achieving the same amount of creepy

Hmm... Daniel was an alcoholic during the Prohibition

Jonathon was late or her had more modern ideals about relationships.

James was antisocial and strange?

And the girl at the end was "dressed like a slut"
Edited Date: 2012-04-14 09:32 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-04-13 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] albion-witch.livejournal.com
So, Edward killed these people for being an under-aged alcoholic, living and presumably having sex with a woman before marriage, being an atheist/agnostic, and a prostitute?

Yes, truly they deserved the death sentence.


Sarcasm doesn't work so well over the internet.


Still, very creepy.

Date: 2012-04-14 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] albion-witch.livejournal.com
Wow, that's actually worse.

Meyer may have not consciously written him to that extreme, though her writing has shown that she's cool with slut-shaming and ableism.

Still, he's barely developed beyond being incredibly hot and rich, so any view of him wouldn't be so inaccurate.

Date: 2012-04-15 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mage-apprentice.livejournal.com
What mental illness did you characterize the old man with?

Date: 2012-04-15 10:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mage-apprentice.livejournal.com
I sympathize. Writing characters with disorders you don't have or know nothing about can be tricky. I once tried writing about a character with narcolepsy. Really tricky to get done at times.

Date: 2012-04-15 02:34 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] melissatreglia
This was chilling. You captured so well how truly dangerous Edward's self-righteousness can be. Because a recovering alcoholic, a man who has sex with the woman he loves, a mentally ill loner, and a girl who likes to dress sexy all CLEARLY deserve to die. *snort*

Date: 2012-04-15 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sum422.livejournal.com
Oh, I loved this! So twisted but powerful and it really highlights just how bad Edward's reasoning and sense of morals are.

The reasons that Edward killed these people for are so petty and ridiculous and it makes me hate him even more when I remember Midnight Sun where he more or less says, "The people I killed were even worse monsters than me."

Really, Edward!? Really!? Yeah, a girl who dresses promiscuously and a RECOVERING alcoholic are totally filth upon society. I think the one that got me the most was the old man, who had mental illness, I believe? I have a twin brother who has severe autism while I have aspergers and I've encountered people who go by the same viewpoint that people like my brother aren't real people because of how they are.

Oh, and let's not forget that Edward only reads the thoughts in people's head at the given time and has no way of really knowing what kind of person they are. Every person has nasty thoughts at one point or another, but that doesn't mean they're going to do it.

Which reminds me: It's not just in a Twilight fanfiction where Edward says that turning Bella is his greatest sin. In Eclipse, he pretty much says that having sex with Bella before marriage would be his greatest sin because he'd make her sin in turn and take away her chance at Heaven.

Oh Edward, you morally reprehensible person, you!

Date: 2012-04-23 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sinestris.livejournal.com
Oh wow, this was just extraordinarily creepy. Edward should NEVER be in a position to pass moral judgement on anyone.

The ones that hit me hardest were the poor boy who was managing to turn himself around and rebuild and the old man with the wonky mind. Being as how I'm trying to sort myself out after many, many years of illness and I have some mental issues (not to his degree, but I'm definitely not good at dealing with people, especially the ones who won't give me a few seconds to work out how to react), so I sympathise with them in a big way.

Just. Yeah. Really well-written and creeeeeeeeeeepyyyyyyyy.

Date: 2012-04-23 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sinestris.livejournal.com
You succeeded admirably. Your Edward is genuinely terrifying.

No need for apologies! You wrote an excellent fic with real characters, and it's not like I normally advertise!

I don't really view them as buttons any more; they're just things I deal with. It can be very hard to tell with me over the internet too, I'm a lot more chatty here than I am in real life!

Date: 2012-05-19 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taewon kook (from livejournal.com)
Well, you have shown me that Edward Cullen is not Dexter Morgan who at least had a clear set of code... and to think that he is even more twisted than Dexter is!

Are you alive?

Date: 2014-04-22 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamsorrytruly.livejournal.com
You never did answer my post and while that's completely understandable given the manipulative and reprehensible nature of all I said and tried to do. The fact that you haven't updated your Journal nor posted any sporkings on Das_Sporking makes me worried that perhaps it's more than just you understanding that what I did was beyond forgiveness. It makes me worry that perhaps your talk of suicide might have become more than talk though I hope that you've just been busy with University or perhaps have grown out of Sporking all together. I still have to try and find out.

My fear of hearing just how much my message revealed about my own twisted nature has finally been superseded by my fear of your own health. And I'm beyond ashamed that it took this long to abandon that selfish cowardice.

So I'm posting this on the off chance that you still look at your Journal to ask are you alright?

I hope you are but hope is such an empty thing.

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