Beta Request: Witching Hour

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Well I'm back. This took longer than I expected but life decided to kick me in the gut. 

This chapter was supposed to cover all of New Moon but it got a whole lot longer and I decided to split it in half. I underestimated the amount of ground I had to cover and as we all know this book lacked any form of plot to use as an anchor point.

So this chapter and the next are about the mechanics of the world and how my stuff and the Twilight stuff relate. 

So with all that said anyone willing to help whip this piece into shape will be most appreciated.

Thanks,
James