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twispitefic2011-05-30 03:14 pm
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Beta Request: Nightfall Round 2
I'm finally back and I have reworked my story a good bit.
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gehayi already went though as a beta reader the first time but since I want to see if the changes I made gel I am asking for a second beta.
The main reason being that I plan to make this a major project like Mervin's Wedding Crashers series so I want it to be good.
Inspiration: Twilight series General. This is a rewrite of the series if it was set in my own universe. It is a world of magic and the humans are far from helpless. This is the first part of a four part series, one chapter for each book.
Summary: A series of strange happenings have been reported in the area round the small town of Forks. As such the Mage Council has sent in a Guardian, one of humanity’s most powerful warriors. What he finds threatens to reignite the flames of ancient war.
gehayi already went though as a beta reader the first time but since I want to see if the changes I made gel I am asking for a second beta.The main reason being that I plan to make this a major project like Mervin's Wedding Crashers series so I want it to be good.
Inspiration: Twilight series General. This is a rewrite of the series if it was set in my own universe. It is a world of magic and the humans are far from helpless. This is the first part of a four part series, one chapter for each book.
Summary: A series of strange happenings have been reported in the area round the small town of Forks. As such the Mage Council has sent in a Guardian, one of humanity’s most powerful warriors. What he finds threatens to reignite the flames of ancient war.
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