ext_6150 ([identity profile] gehayi.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] twispitefic 2011-02-16 11:27 pm (UTC)

Oh, CHARLIE.

This is about fifty billion times better than anything that Meyer ever wrote. It got me crying so hard that I couldn't stop. Charlie Swan deserves so much better. He definitely deserves a human daughter rather than the monstrosity he's saddled with in canon. I feel so sorry for this heartbroken man.

This is what would happen in canon. That's why I saddled the Cullens with financial and legal issues in "Tough Love"--so that Bella COULDN'T go running to them. If she behaved canonically, she would run to the Cullens automatically--and she wouldn't even see her break with her father as a loss.


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